Posted on 19 February 2018 - 11:07 AM
"I woke up in the Forrest, I had no memory of what happened before. I vaguely remember running from something, nothing but terror running through my body. Suddenly I look around, I can't see anything but the trees around me and the marks it left behind. I try and focus, to get an image of what it actually was. I can only see a shadow, it's something large and hungry. I try to get up, pain screams at every motion. I look down and see myself bleeding, my life dripping from the cuts. I see the gash on my stomach, it's rigid and uneven. I can't call for help or get up to run, I sit there while my life runs away with my blood. I can feel my world getting darker, my life is going away from me now. I look up one last time, I can see the moon looking back at me emotionless as me. It's bright light cast down upon me feels like the hand of god taking me away.I'm going to start posting some of my writings I've done here guys. Please do give feedback and tell me anything I can work on. I've been writing for a while now and I will be posting the goods and the bads, I hope you may enjoy these somewhat.
Posted on 19 February 2018 - 11:17 AM
OkPosted on 19 February 2018 - 12:10 PM
1 blocked messagePosted on 19 February 2018 - 01:08 PM
I was in a dark forest when I heard a noise behind me. I turn around and it was a dog. I ran.Last edited on 20 February 2018 - 04:18 PM by HalfCreeper
Super interesting story. For the people who don't realize: this is written from the perspective of the dead guy in Logan Paul's video. Hence the title "Story time with Logan".Posted on 19 February 2018 - 05:31 PM
CleverPosted on 19 February 2018 - 05:51 PM
dude there's not enough details, I prefer reading story with a lot of details. but its okPosted on 19 February 2018 - 06:03 PM
Shiftehh wrote
The lack of details was intentional.
Posted on 20 February 2018 - 10:20 AM
How is this guy a staff wtf?Posted on 20 February 2018 - 10:25 AM
Fucking awesomePosted on 20 February 2018 - 10:54 AM
TPeachT wrote
Posted on 20 February 2018 - 03:54 PM
TPeachT wrote
Is that in a good way or bad?
Posted on 20 February 2018 - 04:15 PM
o/Posted on 20 February 2018 - 04:46 PM
:oPosted on 26 February 2018 - 10:34 PM
o/